Wednesday, 25 November 2009

Screenplay - Draft Two

Title -- DIRECTOR, DIRECTOR OF PHOTOGRAPHY

EXT. STREET -- NIGHT

MURDER 1 takes place (LI strangles using CHAIN)

TITLE -- Actor... (JAMES DILLAN)

INT. House, RECORDING STUDIO -- NIGHT

Each murder will be about 7 seconds long.MURDER 2 takes place (LI turns off lights OFF suddenly kills agent with a GUN)
TITLE—Actor... (LI)

EXT. ALLEYWAY -- NIGHT

MURDER 3 takes place in an ALLEY. LI impersonating a PROSTITUTE, walks up to car talks to agent. BOTH MOUTH to each other. LI leans into car and STABS JAMES)

TITLE -- FATAL SCORN

INT. CORNER SHOP -- NIGHT

JAMES walks into SHOP, picks up carton of milk and sugar.

INT. EVA’S OFFICE -- NIGHT



EVA
Where is he?

EXT. OUTSIDE CORNER SHOP -- NIGHT



LI
In a shop.

INT. CORNER SHOP -- NIGHT



SHOP KEEPER
That will be 80p.

JAMES DILLAN
Here you go, how’s the family?

SHOP KEEPER
There good thanks.

SHOP KEEPER hands over change.

JAMES DILLAN
Cheers mate.

JAMES EXITS.

INT. EVA’S OFFICE -- NIGHT

EVA’S office is her study at home. She is clenching a PHOTO of all her colleges in her hand looking at her next target. (JAMES DILLAN)



EVA
Make it quick

EVA hangs up and sits on chair in SILENCE.

EXT. PARK -- NIGHT

LI back into some bushes, JAMES crosses road and notices LI in BUSHES. DISCRETLY and SLOWLY reaches for his GUN and continues walking. LI creeps up from behind and attacks.

Fight scenes takes place. As LI RETREATS, a NOTE FALLS out of her pocket. JAMES notices this and picks it up.
The piece of paper says --

” John Samuels - 41
21 Marlborough Road,
Walthamstow,
E17 6UN

Pedro Gurrearo - 39
13 Victoria Road,
Westminster,
SW1 7LB

Carlton Robertson – 47
319 Angleton Street,
Soho,
W1 5RD

James Dillan - 39
64 Talbot Road,
Brixton,
SE5 3TG”

The first three address' will have a cross through them and possibly a photo stuck down.

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